In this post I put my reviews on the works of my colleagues and their reviews on my work:
My review on the week 1 of Abeer's reflections
https://learnerlogbookllb.wordpress.com/2017/01/22/week1/comment-page-1/#comment-3
No doubt, this reflection spot the light directly to the main points in three courses. The reader finds it easy and smoothly to understand each course features and the methodology of the instructors. The writer explained specific part with focus on its impact on the learner journey that was provided by the instructors such as the search through the E-library and the methods of citation according APA format.
I appreciate these reflections for three courses
in a simple way and deeper meaning to highlight for the impact of the
instructors strategies.
Thanks Abeer for this useful glance.
My review on week 2 reflections of Abeer:
https://learnerlogbookllb.wordpress.com/2017/01/28/week-2/comment-page-1/#comment-2
This reflection consists of comparison between
three courses the learner studies. The idea to talk about each course from both
sides, advantages and disadvantages, is
a clear and useful. I noticed that the first course PID was discussed in brief.
The second course, ADCL, was described by explaining the style of the
instructor and the strategies which were integrated. I think there is
exaggerated by the learner when she said that one of the traditional strategy used by the instructor is innovative!
“The ID of this course depended on
using innovative instructional methods by asking the audience themselves to
search and discover the information about the topic”.
Instead of that it's suitable to
say that brainstorming is an innovative strategy. Indeed, the learner focused
on partial of the instructors strategies without explaining if they use new
tools of technology and how? And what kinds of activities they were taking. In
the learner discussion of the third course she said that the instructors depend
on the lecture pattern instead of allowing students to be he learner-centered
learning. That cause the boredom for the
learners and there is no engagement in the learning process.
Finally, It is a good idea to
integrate Gagne’s nine events here, but it would be more useful if the learner describes
each phase widely with examples of the three courses.
Abeer's review on my blog posts
of three week's reflections:
https://learnerlogbookllb.wordpress.com/2017/01/30/peer-review/
In this page, I’ll review Gubran’s
blog of reflections. This page will include: Strengths of the peer’s
reflection, Weaknesses, and Suggestions for further improvement.
Strengths of the peer’s
reflection:
1. The author used a clear language with well- organized points and
good explanation which was relevance in comparing the courses instructional
design. He supported the explanation by providing examples.
2. He used what is written in the criteria to compare between the
courses.
3. He applied Gagne’s nine events of instruction Model in the
comparison of the ID.
4. He detailed the analysis of the course content which make it
understandable for the reader.
Weaknesses:
·
He didn’t mention what was
unclear in instructional design that the instructor used.
·
He didn’t write about the
learning effectiveness about each course.
Suggestions for further
improvement:
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It is better to talk
briefly about the lesson’s activities and tasks which were compared to support
the Gagne’s nine events of instruction Model stages or any other model. It will
be more clear for the reader to understand what does the author mean.
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Thinking critically by
providing effective improvements and offering suggestions for unclear points
and weak areas in the instructional design of the lessons.
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Evaluating the
instructional design in general for the courses, which areas need to redesign,
what is needed to add, which points should be removed, and how the designer
integrate the technology with the ID to be more beneficial for effective
learning.
My peer review on the reflections of Shaikh week 3 reflections
https://shaikha200100696id.blogspot.ae/2017/01/week-3-reflections-learning-and.html?showComment=1485931147936#c5597354655722246541
My peer review on the reflections of Shaikh week 3 reflections
https://shaikha200100696id.blogspot.ae/2017/01/week-3-reflections-learning-and.html?showComment=1485931147936#c5597354655722246541
I read this post recently,
I found it useful and smoothly to follow. The learner compared two courses she
had studied by applying Gagne's nine events as an instructional design model. This
model allows the learner to establish a good manner of comparison. She compares
the two courses by each step of Gagne's model inappropriate way and briefly
phrases. It was preferred to add the opinion of the leader after each step of
comparison to explain what the right and wrong in applying the model by the
instructors.
For examples, she mentioned
that the instructor of ADCL course gave them feedback, but she did not describe
the level and the impact of this feedback and how the learners interact with
this issue.
At last, the learner added
an important point as a suggestion for improving the teaching and learning
processes.
Thanks Shaikha for this a
beneficial reflections.
Jubran Saif ALGumaei
learner at HBMSU